Haiku poetry
Waves crash On rocks near the shore Their echoes Sounding like lions Snowflakes fall From clouds overhead Coating the ground Within a white blanket Birds fly Nesting in nearby trees Making homes for nestlings Yours, Gypsiebelle

Beautiful images gypsibelle. I admire anyone who can write poetry; a very difficult form of writing for me. GG

Bees hover From flower to flower Collecting pollen for honey Fish swim In lakes and streams Searching for new homes Gongs ring At nearby temples Echoing off of mountains During the early morning Yours, Gypsiebelle

Lovely poetry I really like the imagery

I enjoyed your second poem too. Keep writing! Gaffer's Girl

Your second poem really said 'Summer' to me Gypsie. keep going :hug

Wild horses roam Through the grasslands and mountains Forever free Children gather Outside in the park Playing games with friends Empty cars parked alone Inside garages and buildings Their owners elsewhere Yours, Gypsie

Great Poetry
I'll probably do a few more as that type of poetry is very easy for me to do as opposed to writing fanfic where that takes me much longer to do. I'm in awe of people who can do that sort of writing. Thanks again, Gypsie I can write pages and pages of melodrama with hardly a thought (I did not say it was good I just said I could do it) Your Haiku is excellent, thank you for sharing such beautiful things.

Summer evening Catching fireflies around campsites Roasting marshmallows on skewers Making s'mores Swimming in warm oceans Watching surfers catch the waves Children on the shore Making sand castles Yours, Gypsie

its so pretty and so well done. I'm very jealous

Wow! Somehow I missed your last two until now. Absolutely lovely images on No. 4. No 3 makes me feel how isolated and limiting civilization can make us. Don't know if that was your intended point, but I know generally Haiku are written to evoke an image or impression. You have definitely done well. GG